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Burden of the Elite: A Narrative Deathwing Primer - 2006/04/04 08:31
This thread discusses the Content article: Burden of the Elite: A Narrative Deathwing Primer
Here is another of our contest submissions. One suggestion I'd make to Ezzeran would be to insert some page breaks, turning it into a more structured form, with chapters etc. Also, please change "completely dead"  It sounds a bit strange...
With the right revolting piety of tone
The word "Freedom"
Can make you want to lock yourself
In a deep dark dungeon |
