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Cheatah
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 Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/17 09:11 I posted this at Warseer, but I'll post it here as well, so you can all post your thoughts on it. This will probably be a contest entry, but it still needs some work...

check it out Angelis Destructorum
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Blakkheim
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/20 17:22 Nice one cheatah, my only C&C would be:
Gene seed: I don't really see the point in the mixing of the geneseed since the chapters you have mentioned are direct 2nd founding. But thats just me

Second would be homeworld, where abouts in the galaxy is it?

On the plus I'm sure this is ever expansive, keep updating the fluff and let us know, how about some fluff on your chapter master? Your recruiting world, what traits do they bring? etc. All in all good work! Like the picture of the planet too!
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Astromarine
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/20 18:30 according to Cheatah on the Warseer forums, it's gonna change a lot pretty soon anyway, it got into a bit discussion on acceptable fluff, then I made a huge ramble about a possible idea, then some other people also gave their thoughts... Now the poor guy has to mish mash all that into a coherent whole. I don't envy the task With the right revolting piety of tone
The word "Freedom"
Can make you want to lock yourself
In a deep dark dungeon
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Blakkheim
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/20 18:33 Poor guy, I shall have a browse through warseer and see what other people think.
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Cheatah
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/20 21:33 It's 2.30 AM around here and I just finished a 3! hour addition to the fluff... so check it out

The pic of the planet is actually stolen from some site... now I only hope they don't find out

Yeah, fluff for chapter master... I just need to invent one... the most difficult task is coming up with nice names

Hmm, Blakkheim, you got a point with the mixing of 1st and 2nd founding geneseed, but maybe since the heresy the 3 pools of geneseed were split and they started (d)evolving/mutating (if ever so slightly) into their own types instead of all DA geneseed.

If it doesn't make any sense at all, I'll need to revise that as well

Astro: I molded your "ramble" into my own, expanded some of it and contracted some other parts... thanks for the ideas Angelis Destructorum
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Astromarine
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/21 07:43 Looks really nice. Let me know when you think it's fit to add to the site, for the contest (if you're still interested) With the right revolting piety of tone
The word "Freedom"
Can make you want to lock yourself
In a deep dark dungeon
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Cheatah
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/21 10:10 Alright... I think the largest amount is finished, but I'll add/change some details here and there.

My guess is that this will be at a near-final stage in the coming week or so, so I'll tell you when It's as good as finished, so you can add it Angelis Destructorum
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Cheatah
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 Re:Angelis Destructorum -- Successor chapter - 2006/03/27 19:19 Added the Supreme Grand Master's story and some more in the "Gene seed" part...

Also added some more links

Astro, you can add it to the site now, I'd like to enter it into the contest

Post edited by: Cheatah, at: 2006/03/27 19:19 Angelis Destructorum
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