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Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/25 19:36
This thread discusses the Content article: Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/26 23:09
I'd say not much can be improved, that text is awesome. It's well written and in depth.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/26 23:16
Thanks for the compliment. Sadly, since I got the article in the B&C days, I'm unsure I'll be able to contact the original author to let him know it's here (I, erm, started working on this a "few" months ago). I've emailed him, if he's still around he should be able to come here and update it.
Welcome to the site, BTW. Hope you like the feel of the place. 
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 07:37
very very nice artical there. I recommend you go through it and do some formating and spellchecking though.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 08:30
Yeah, I know it's necessary. I just want to hold off on updating it for a bit to see if the original author responds to my email. For all I know, he's done two better versions already... Since the B&C forum shut down, I have no way of knowing. If he doesn't respond, or does but doesn't feel like taking care of the article himself, then I'll change it.
One question I have. On long articles such as this, do you guys prefer just one long page like what we have currently, or should I insert pagebreaks? I'll go insert a couple now, so you guys can see how it would work.
[edit]there, I've added a pagebreak. Now you get a page index, and the page isn't so long, but I don't know if I like the way the index takes up space at the beginning. Please give your opinion.
Post edited by: Astromarine, at: 2006/02/27 08:34
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 10:16
Page breaks are good. Any chance of gettin a few pics on it as well? Maybe when people start posting pics of their armies we could get some photos of the best models up there.
One minor gripe with the article. It is superbly written, but I believe that ALL chaplains in the Dark Angels chapter are Interrogator Chaplains. We don't have 2 different groups. Other than that-it's lookin good.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 11:00
I prefere it as one artical really, means i can get stuck into reading it without pressing buttons ect.
p.s. could you post the image you use in the background on the right as i would like to use it as my desktop background (could it be sized 1280/1024).
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 12:20
You can do it yourself. Right click on it, you should see somthing like "view background image". after you press that, just right-click again and save.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 13:21
thanks there, got it as my desktop  . Just wondering if you had a larger version of it though?
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/27 18:14
just re-read it and i agree with squig, i cant ever remember hearing about normal chaplains in the dark angels.
My advise would be to start editing the artical to remove the normal chaplain bits and may i sugest changing the tortue devices to more evil examples. Half of them are painfull but to a space marine having a spike through you wont cause much bother, with the fallen bring far more resistant to pain ect i can see the fallen lasting out for ages with the currect lists devices. I think the DA would use some horrendious devices and means to get the fallen to repent.
If it was me i would add in bits into the artical that sudgest that some of the interrogation devices and how they are used end up "warping" the fallens minds to get them to repent there sins. The artical then would allow the reader to decide if the Dark angels are really the good side or if they themselfs are the fallen.
Tbh i think the DA really stand out for me because of these questions and of course because they are the Emperor's finest (spits on the space puppies)
P.S. I think the libarians should play more of a role in the interrogations There powers would be of great use to break down any reistance or other mental blocks so the inttogation is as quick as possable.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/02/28 21:07
Question, are aspirant Interrogator-Chaplains automatically inducted into the Deathwing or are they tested first? If so then there would be general Chaplains if only momentarily...
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2006/03/02 20:30
I've seen GM Dorby roaming the halls of E-Gate unter the name Grand Master Dorbius.
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Re:Roles of Chaplains within the Dark Angels - 2007/01/11 01:36
I don't know if anyone here is going to see this, but I thought I would say a few things about this article..
1) Thanks for the compliments, I really appreciate it, and it makes the work I put into it worth it.
2) I shall update the torture devices, whats in there is simply what I could find on short notice.
3) Regular Chaplains were from Codex: Angels of Death (iirc), we're there was two listings, one for Chaplains and one for I. Chaplains. I also thought why would the DA only have Interogator Chaplains, Surely it is more logical for them to have regular Chaplains to handle the Spiritual stuff, while while IC handle the Interrogations etc (which I would believe would take a bit of time),
4) When i eventually get around to rewriting this slightly, and updating it, Librarians are going to play a much more important role in the Interogation preocedure.
5) Thank the Lion, I thought i'd lost this when my HD had a bit of a hiccup a few months back, Thanks Astromarine..
Once again, thanks for the compliments, and I hope to update this very soon
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